Posted in: allegory, fable, poem

on the top of things – with Afghanistan

on the top of things

there is a hole a hole

is a good thing said

the rabbit a rabbit is

a good thing said the

singer the singer is a

good thing said the

nation the nation is

a good thing? asked

the people is it?

what is good? Good

is good said the rabbit

said the singer said the

people but

what about me? said

the nation a hole

is a good thing said

the hole but what

about me said the nation

come into me

said the hole I have space

but I am Afghanistan

said the nation

I have space for all said

the hole come into me

rabbit come into me singer

come into me people I have

space will I find my way back

said the rabbit no said the hole

and I said the singer will

I sing again under the sun

no said the hole but I have

space and me said the people

will we live again as one

no said the hole but I

have space come into me

I will come said the nation

come then said the hole

come into blackness I have

space and Afghanistan did and got lost

 

on the top of things

are a hole of darkness a rabbit on the move

a singer in light and

a people as one

but Afghanistan

Afghanistan is gone

 

 

We participated in a a writing workshop for male refugees, and were tasked with writing a text containing four individually given words. We had 30 minutes.

The words for this piece were: Rabbit, Afghanistan, Get Lost and Singer. Later Afghanistan was replaced with Nation to give the poem a broader extent and international application.
But following the return of Afghanistan’s new leaders to olden ways the original gained new relevance.

Now there are two versions: The international version and the original one above. Three, if you count the translation into Danish.

 

[English Intl. Version] [Dansk]

 

 

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